I was originally planing to do the first story on the forum but I was beat to it (Revenge of Dr. Fetus, an awsome story buy the way, check it out HERE
Thought of this story last night and thought I should share it
Anyway, story set as if Meat boy has a mind blank and doesn't remember any thing before the game started
Here it goes:
Intro: I am in a white room, I am meat boy, I seem to have no skin, this makes feel very uncomfortable. Suddenly a girl made out of bandages appears, Bandage Girl. I feel a close connection to her, I have this warm tingling feeling inside of me, I like her, no, I love her. I know that we are not brother and sister, or in any way related. I think that we are married, but then notice no engagement ring, or any rings for that matter. I decide that we are dating. Over in the other side of the room a fetus in a jar wearing a tuxedo appears. I insistently have a strong dislike towards him, a name springs to mind: Dr Fetus. He then lunges at me and beats me up. Before I can react to what is going on Dr. Fetus snatches up Bandage Girl and flies off. I sit there being part sorry for mysef and ashamed of myself for not being able to save her. A voice in my head starts yelling:
"So what are you waiting for?
Go save her, hero!"
Hero... I like that
End of Intro
Chapter 1: The Forest
I follow Dr. Fetus into the forest, I hear bandage girl scream for help, I see her on what seems to be a floating block. As I run towards her I notice that my blood is spreading on everything I touch, this makes me self-conscious, wondering if I have always been skinless. It doesn't seem to hurt so I try to ignore it. I realize I can not jump to the platform from the ground. I go over to the wall to see if I can climb it, but to no avail. I decide to try and do a wall jump off it. I run up to it and jump. I seem to slide up further than I thought I would, and jump off at the highest point of what I have named "a wall slide". I manage to get to her and feel a magnificent feeling in side, I think this is the best moment of my life, when suddenly Dr. Fetus comes out of nowhere and takes her from me. I now feel as though it is the worst moment of my life.
/Yeah thats just the intro and the first level, gonna finish chapter one off later today, as I am going to play through chapter one so I know the order :-) Tell me what you think so far