I tried playing it. I really like the ideas you got, but I feel like they're just too long. I'm a bit biased because I've never liked how Ogmo plays but if you make these levels too long it starts getting very frustrating. IMO, levels should never be longer than 30 seconds, 60 in extreme cases.
That said I liked the House level.
thx for your comment!
i completely understand u, some levels are quite long ... the maze for example is about 120 secs to fully complete (with bandage) ... it's quite easy, but also frustrating if you die in the last part ...
i have 16 levels complete now, and i can assure you that almost all of them are lvls around 10 - 30 secs.
so, thx again for your comments and look after the full chapter in a few days :)