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Eviltwinlink
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« on: May 09, 2011, 08:42:20 PM »

Hello, I recently made a level that I will be using for my chapter I am creating. This level is called Megaton and I've worked on it for quite a few hours today. After having people test it that I personally know, I would like you guys on here to try it out for me. Please leave any feedback you may have. I would like to note this level is quite difficult, but I think these forums can handle it =D.

News: I just finished a second level for the chapter: Spelunky, try it out =)

Spelunky: My newest Level





Megaton: My first level thus far.
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« Reply #1 on: May 09, 2011, 09:22:27 PM »

The background colors are nice but you didnt put much effort in making it look good other than that..
The maggots look very unreal
Id erase them and create like waves and hils to make it look normal.
The Building looks like its floating
Try adding some extra floor and stuff on the outside so it will be nicer looking.
The whole map just lacks stuff with "Z"..
Maybe ill try it again later and see if there is more.

Now as for the level it self, Id move down the gravityball (if it makes it easyer) and have only one missle launcher on the side of bandage girl, This will make the stage easyer and much more fun to people who just want to try stuff..

EDIT: Megaton hammer?
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« Reply #2 on: May 09, 2011, 10:23:31 PM »

Welcome. To. Megaton. Friendliest town around.
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« Reply #3 on: May 10, 2011, 07:44:01 AM »

The background colors are nice but you didnt put much effort in making it look good other than that..
The maggots look very unreal
Id erase them and create like waves and hils to make it look normal.
The Building looks like its floating
Try adding some extra floor and stuff on the outside so it will be nicer looking.
The whole map just lacks stuff with "Z"..
Maybe ill try it again later and see if there is more.

Now as for the level it self, Id move down the gravityball (if it makes it easyer) and have only one missle launcher on the side of bandage girl, This will make the stage easyer and much more fun to people who just want to try stuff..

EDIT: Megaton hammer?
Thanks =), and I am aware of the looks of the level, I was just eager to see if people liked the level itself. I will address the difficulty of the level and the looks pretty soon. I appreciate your comments.

Edit:
I adjusted many of the things you suggested but for some reason I can't build outside of the level's perimeter. I thought I could do that but I can't which makes it difficult for me to make stuff on the outside of it.

Edit2: I made the improvements and uploaded the level again.
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« Reply #4 on: May 11, 2011, 06:43:47 PM »

Hello! I made another level for the chapter, its titled Spelunky and its a tough one. Give it a shot and give me any feedback that you may have. You can find it by searching Spelunky in Super Meat World. I've put a ton of work into this thing today so if you find any problems by all means let me know. Thank you!
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