I Loved the end bit were you have to jump off of the conveyor belt, i just wish the trip there wasn't so horrid
the map was Way too touchy for me, the precision required is far to strict. Sorry but i did not enjoy this level. I do not find having a REALLY set path that give the player NO room for error "fun" i find it very repetitive and frustrating.
Long story short i found your level too hard. Hard in a bad way, not in a challenging way.
But you have the right idea in some places and im sure you'll improve so im looking forward for your future levels.